Kaleidoscope

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The Insignificant Somebody

Posted by Kaleidoscope on November 2, 2007

Author: Disturbed Stranger Copyright © 2007
Blog: No Blog
Location: Kuwait

cao5o14f.jpgI woke up on a gloomy Monday morning with one side of my face pressed on the cold interior of a dumpster I called home. It was strewn with various possessions and a good smattering of rubbish. Pigeon feathers, apple cores and sweet wrappers littered the edges decoratively while old toys lay higgledy-piggledy among the tangled rags of worn-out clothes, and a mess of newspapers, partially covering me, sat in a puddle of light coming from a lonely, stray ray of sunlight. The rats of the night scurried off for cover while I, the dominator of the garbage heap, heaved myself on two weak legs, each the size of a slightly overgrown chopstick, to start a new day.

By midday business was booming. I had stationed myself near a famous café where most middle-class people would have breakfast before hurrying off to their diverse jobs. Numerous individuals took pity on me and spared me a few round coins, and on rare occasions, crumpled bank notes were sometimes whipped out. However, a certain individual’s picture stuck out as clear as glass in my mind, though it was not very pleasant. I had, unfortunately, chose the wrong day to walk up to a man who seemed extremely agitated, grinding his teeth as he stood there steaming. He looked up at me as I approached, his face was beaded with sweat although it was quite a chilly afternoon. He wiped his eyebrow with a white-gloved hand, pushing along as he did so, some of the long greasy hair out of his face. A pair of thin spectacles sat upon his crooked nose, his nostrils flared at the sight of me. I extended my arm, without really expecting anything, to produce a chipped mug that was stained with dirt, and I gently rattled it. Without realizing what had hit me, a split second later, the man had jumped to his feet, and had spat a relatively large amount of saliva in my direction, which hit me directly in the face and started dribbling downwards like cold, raw egg-white. He had then stalked off at a quick pace muttering furiously under his breath.

Night swam across the sky, as I huddled up in a corner, covering myself with filthy rags that had a sick grey tinge with striking resemblance to the colour of my unshaven and exhausted face. I rested my head on the window of the shop where I had decided to sleep. Minutes later, my head lolled over as I gave a huge grunt and my face was pressed against the window. The misty fug my breath had left on the window sparkled and reflected the glare of the orange street lamp, casting me into a world where I was not known, but just a ghost, just a nobody, just a beggar.

22 Responses to “The Insignificant Somebody”

  1. The Keeper Says:

    A lot of sympathy :S
    Disturbed.S why are your narratives so.. disturbed? :P Beautifully written
    Although I was expecting ur next piece to be the follow up :( you don’t keep ur promises.

  2. Q8tia Says:

    Oh my God. 7aram :(

  3. No Wrong Says:

    Very strong character. Brilliant choice of descriptives.

    Significant indeed.

  4. Delinquent Oppressor Says:

    A very moving story. I liked it how you could make the readers feel what the character is going through. However, did u have to associate egg whites to the description of the spit? It will not escape my mind whenever I have eggs for breakfast :P

  5. harmonie22 Says:

    I hear you, Disturbed Stranger. Loud and clear.

    A Disturbed Native

  6. Tantalize Says:

    My interpretation: It’s about perhaps being Kuwaiti, yet not fitting in with most Kuwaitis since individualism isn’t greatly encouraged in the country. Thus, ‘the insignificant somebody’ is the outsider, loner who is trying to survive by maintaining his own sense of personality. He is always residing as the shadow of society because he isn’t noticed. Yet, this may be the aim; to deliberately not fit in; to fail in trying to climb up the ladder; to deliberately want to be bottomed; to be knocked down continuously: to seek the pain from people who aren’t homeless.

    Masochistic.

    Disturbed, yet very human, indeed.

  7. BuzzKill Says:

    I read this as a homeless laborer worker who hasn’t been paid in months and how he is treated in ignorance by those more fortunate; he is no better than garbage to some. Very symbolic, the food imagery, and at the end with his head leaning against the window shop, window shopping dreaming.

  8. jewaira Says:

    I personally think the story told in the third person would be more effective in this case.

    When a person is so emotionally and physically dejected, he does not see himself with such clarity (as the writer has done) nor does he care about the way he looks. He would not even want to look in the mirror much less be introspective.

  9. Anonymous Says:

    Inspiring.
    I do not think we should feel any sympathy towards the protagonist for obviously he is in no need for it. He seems more in control/ has power over his life unlike the rest of us who have to adjust and reshape our being to fit society’s standards.

    I see where you’re coming from Disturbed Stranger, powerful.

  10. Karmically inbalanced Says:

    why masochistic? what happened to art for art’s sake?
    don’t overanalyze it, i dont think the writer is really relating him/herself to the piece .. :P but it does show that s/he or he might have a disoriented mind ;)
    very effectively written though, shows a lot of talent, keep it up :)

  11. A55ad Says:

    Great use of descriptives and written beautifully. Keep writing, enjoyed it.

  12. chop me up Says:

    love it.. well written. very descriptive! i can actually c the story as if it ws a movie.. gd job.. keep it up

  13. jawhara Says:

    great story bs laish ka2eba o kelha nakad? enksr 5a6re :( i was so moved bs l2ne te2thrt y3ne it’s a proof ena u’r narrative
    gaweya o ur techniques in writting are creative , o kalematch wayd mo3abera , any way i loved it and i’m waiting 4 more ;) o keep it up ee 9ij 3ndi ba3d so2al how come u dont have more narratives posted here? coz i would like to read more

  14. hayat Says:

    i dont understand anything from half-arabic (latinarabic) half english comments like jawhara’s! Is this a postmodern way of communication?

  15. Jawhara Says:

    Yes it is. I am sorry I didn’t mean to be unclear :(

  16. Disturbed Stranger Says:

    Thank you everybody for your comments.

    “Buzzkill”- I think it’s a little more than that.

    “Anonymous”- Well done.

    “Karmically inbalanced”-….”disoriented mind”? Do you fully comprehend the meaning of ‘disturbed’? :) but you got one thing right…..
    “Tantalize”- must everything be Masochistic? (interseting interpretation though I do not think it is the case here).

    “Jewaira”- I disagree, the only person who understands the true amount of pain you endure is yourself only therefore a 3rd person narrative wouldn’t have been as effective.

    “jawhara”- LOL. Ba3ad ana nakadiya shasawi? :P (translation for Hayat: I am a depressing person, what to do? ;) ) I have more narratives posted elsewhere :)

  17. Jawhara Says:

    POSTED WHERE??! Another blog?

    I WANT… :(

  18. Undefeatable Says:

    amazing Beautifully writen!…. your “insignifcant somebody” had attracted me from it’s first sentence .. keep the work up sweety , i can sense the purity and honesty in you which we really miss in our writers nowadays ..

  19. Hadija Says:

    I enjoyed this piece. Very well written. Excellent choice of words. Keep it up DS.

  20. viva Says:

    7lwa al story bs tksr alkha6r :(
    keep on going
    na6ra ur next story :)

  21. Disturbed Stranger Says:

    “The Keeper” and everyone else who asked for a follow up on Reluctance vs Submission along with various other short stories… I have moved to a new blog:

    http://www.disturbedstranger.wordpress.com

  22. L Says:

    cool Disturbed!! :D

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